Making Videos and Slowing Them Down

Making videos is fun until you get to the editing part. Then things seem to go in strange directions. I did get this slowed down version done . I think it shows the beginning and middle steps fairly well. If you want to see a subject or if you have suggestions for me please let me know.

What I have learned so far:
I got tired of painting really good bad paintings. Do you know what I mean? There was nothing wrong with them but they were not dynamic and they tended to be all middle toned. Then I decided to block in my darks and build from there. It works much better. My book describes this well and now I am providing video and watercolor coaching so we can all have more fun and success.